What Is Words On A Page

Words On A Page is a blog dedicated to analysing films old and new. We look at the story, the characters, the action, and everything else that defines a film.

We aim to show that the foundation of every film is the script- The "Words On A Page" that give this blog its name. In doing this, we aim to encourage aspiring screenwriters to look at both the strengths and weaknesses of films that they see, and apply the lessons learnt to their own scripts

Friday, 27 February 2015

MoviePoet - The Best Short Scripts

You might be getting used to the in-depth film and script reviews posted on this site, but here is something different.

One of my favorite screenwriting sites, MoviePoet, is closing down tomorrow. MoviePoet was a site where amateur and professional screenwriters could submit short scripts for monthly competitions. These scripts were usually up to five pages long, but some of the competitions challenged participants to make shorts, single-page scripts and even feature-length screenplays. 

During the eight years in which the site operated, over 2400 scripts have been submitted on it. Below are five of the best. All of these won the monthly competitions with over 40% of users giving them an "Excellent" rating. Click on the script title to read them.

Christmas Cards by David M. Troop

Les Garcons by JeanPierre Chapoteau

Saved My Bacon by Tim Westland

The Tower of Wishes by Matias Caruso

Wheel by Dan Delgado

All of these scripts are published here with the permission of the authors. 


Monday, 16 February 2015

5 Screenwriting Lessons – Little Miss Sunshine



Who Wrote It?

Little Miss Sunshine was written by Michael Arndt.

How Long Is It?

Little Miss Sunshine is 101 minutes long, including credits.

What’s It About?

Little Miss Sunshine follows the Hoovers, a dysfunctional family who live in Albuquerque. They consist of harried mother Sheryl (played by Toni Collette), Richard, her husband, an unsuccessful self-help teacher (played by Greg Kinnear), drug addicted grandpa Edwin (played by Alan Arkin), uncle Frank (played by Steve Carell), a gay scholar recovering from a recent suicide attempt, teenage son Dwayne (played by Paul Dano), who is taking a vow of silence, and daughter Olive (played by Abigail Breslin), a perky seven year-old obsessed with beauty pageants. When Olive gets a last-minute invitation to compete at the Little Miss Sunshine beauty pageant, which will be held in California, the Hoover family have two days to get to the venue in a derelict VW camper van, and their journey proves to be highly eventful.

5 Screenwriting Lessons – Little Miss Sunshine
(The Following May Contain Spoilers)

Journeys Are Vital to Character Growth – The main focus of Little Miss Sunshine is the Hoovers’ realisation that they will have to work together in order to fulfil Olive’s dreams. Out of all the family members, this challenge is hardest for Dwayne. His dislike of his family is expressed clearly and effectively when Frank tries to start a conversation with him at the dinner table. When Frank asks Dwayne if he has any friends, Dwayne writes “I hate everyone” and underlines his comment when Frank mentions the rest of the family. His strained relationship with them is severely tested when he finds out that he’s colorblind and will never be able to fulfil his dream of being a pilot. This causes him to have a breakdown, during which he ends his vow of silence and viciously attacks his family. However, when Olive decides to go and comfort him, Dwayne realises how much she appreciates him, and re-joins the family, allowing them to get to their destination in time. Dwayne’s acceptance of Olive’s dream demonstrates that he has become a more selfless character, as her goals now matter more to him than his failures.

Another member of the family who tries to deal with unattainable dreams is Richard. When he finds out that his agent, Stan Grossman, has failed to land the deal that would get his book published, he steals a motorbike and drives to the hotel where Stan is staying to confront him personally. Once there, Richard responds angrily to Stan’s comments about his inability to sell as an author, and announces that he is dissolving their partnership. During this sequence, Richard’s assertive nature, which has previously been a hindrance in his relationship with others, is given a more positive use, as he states that will not let others define him and the manner in which he pursues his dreams. Dwayne and Richard are both forced to realise that the effort they put into attaining their goals was futile, and a longer-lasting and more reliable source of happiness can be found by supporting their family.

Give Characters Shades of Grey – No matter how colourful and distinctive a character is, they need to be depicted with enough nuance to seem realistic. The characterisation of Edwin provides a good example of a memorable but seemingly one-note character who is portrayed with increasing complexity the longer we get to know him. Initially, Edwin appears to be little more than a vulgar and immature grandparent. In the car, Edwin gives Dwayne a talk in which he provides very inappropriate advice, telling him to start having sex as quickly and often as possible, in a speech full of profane language. However, when he interacts with Olive, we see another side to him, as he assures her that she is “beautiful inside and out”, and tells her not to worry about failing, as the real losers are those that do not try. The contrast between Edwin’s crass and offensive behaviour towards the male members of the Hoover family and his caring treatment of Olive develops his character, as the seeming contradictions between the two sides of his personality demonstrate that he is not a completely stereotypical character. This makes him seem more rounded and interesting to watch.

Olive is another character with an important personality trait that is gradually established throughout the course of the movie. In spite of the enthusiasm with which she pursues her dreams of being a beauty queen, Olive’s insecurity is her defining flaw. When the family have breakfast at a diner, Richard tells her that the ice cream that she has ordered can make her fat, causing her to feel uncomfortable. At the pageant, Olive meets one of her favourite beauty queens, Miss California, who says that she eats ice cream frequently as well. This highlights one of the main problems with beauty pageants, as Olive feels like she has to conform to an established image in order to compete. Miss California’s comments demonstrate that it is unnecessary for Olive to forbid herself from enjoying the things she loves, and this foreshadows the primary message of the climax, that Olive doesn't need to follow the conventions of beauty pageants, and, like the other members of the Hoover family, is happiest being herself.  

Establish Personalities Effectively – The Hoover family are introduced in an opening sequence that establishes their quirks and flaws. Olive is watching a video of an old beauty pageant, Richard is giving a lecture to a near-empty classroom, Edwin is taking heroin in the bathroom, and Sheryl is arguing over the phone, denying the fact that she is smoking in the car. This extract sets up the various obstacles that the family face in their daily life. Whilst it establishes their unusual nature, it also demonstrates that their problems are typical enough for them to seem like realistic and relatable characters.

The emphasis on the Hoovers’ distinct personalities is a pivotal part of the first act, especially when they sit together at the dinner table for the first time. The primary sources of conflict in the scene are Frank’s reluctance to reveal the issues that led to his suicide attempt and Richard’s belief that Frank’s actions render him a failure. Their primary character flaws, namely Frank’s inability to get over his depression and Richard’s refusal to accept the perceived weaknesses of others, are fully displayed in this scene, and the presence of the rest of the family provides an extra level of tension, as they notice these failings as well. This means that both Richard and Frank have to face up to their negative traits in order to gain the respect of those around them. Generally, the first act is focused on setting up the dysfunctions and flaws that define the Hoover family, whilst making them appealing enough for the viewer to want them to overcome these issues.

Hypocrisy is Key to Comedy – Comedy is heavily based on the contrast between an expected outcome and an unexpected one, and this incongruity can often be highlighted through characters who say one thing and do another. The best example of this in Little Miss Sunshine occurs during the climactic beauty pageant. The various girls who participate are dressed in a manner that is highly inappropriate for their age, with several wearing bikinis. When Olive performs the routine that Edwin created for her, it turns out to be a burlesque-style striptease. The pageant organisers are horrified by this, and attempt to remove Olive from the stage. The contrast between their acceptance of the earlier performances and their reaction to Olive’s dancing suggests that they regard the latter as extreme and unusual, but the viewer is made aware of the fact that the difference between Olive and her competitors is not as significant as it seems to the people running the pageant. This narrow gap, and the inability of the pageant judges to notice it, highlights how unreliable their opinions are, and suggests that the sexualisation of child performers is inherently problematic.

Tight Time Frames Increase Tension –The Hoover family have just two days to make the 800-mile journey from Albuquerque to California, and they have to deal with problems that make an already-difficult task seem impossible.  When Richard breaks the clutch, the mechanic he consults claims that replacement parts will not arrive until the following week. The Hoovers soon find a solution to this problem, as they are told that they can get the car moving by pushing it until the engine starts, then jumping into the vehicle. This dangerous strategy establishes that the Hoovers are willing to take any risks to get to California. More importantly, it provides effective symbolism for the changes that they will have to undergo on their journey. In order to achieve their external goal (reaching the beauty pageant) and their internal desire (repairing the rifts between the various family members), the Hoovers will have to work together to keep the VW van – and their relationship – on track.

The problems with the car seem insignificant later on, as the Hoovers face a number of problems that would usually spell the end to a road trip like theirs. At the midway point of the film, Edwin dies of a drug overdose. However, realising how much seeing Olive at the pageant would have meant to him, the family continue on their journey anyway. When they are told that they cannot transport Edwin’s body until funeral arrangements have been made, they steal it from the hospital and hide it in the trunk of their car until they reach their destination. Their readiness to carry out such a risky action highlights how desperate they are to get to the beauty pageant, and establishes that their journey is no longer solely for Olive’s sake – it matters just as much for the rest of the family. This shift in motivation proves that the Hoover family understand each other better, and this would not have happened were it not for the time spent on the journey so far, and the difficulties they have faced together.

Conclusion

Little Miss Sunshine proved to be successful both critically and financially because of its engaging and developed characters and ability at dealing with dark issues, such as suicide, depression and child exploitation, whilst keeping a generally upbeat tone throughout. The Hoovers are relatable characters whose growth during the movie is entirely believable, and the story is both familiar and unusual. The blend of the conventional and the unique allows Little Miss Sunshine to appeal to both viewers who want something that is fun to watch, and those who are interested in more challenging fare. This is the main reason why the film was popular on release and remains well-regarded today.

Tuesday, 20 January 2015

5 Screenwriting Lessons – The Player


Who Wrote It?


The Player was written by Michael Tolkin, and based on his novel of the same name.

How Long Is It?


The Player is 124 minutes long, including credits.

What’s It About?


The Player follows Griffin Mill (played by Tim Robbins), an executive at a film studio with the job of approving or rejecting the numerous scripts he sees. When he begins to receive threatening letters, he suspects David Kahane (played by Vincent D’Onofrio), a hot-tempered screenwriter whose idea he had dismissed in the past, of sending them, and goes to Pasadena to confront him. During a heated brawl, Griffin accidently kills David, but as the threats continue, he realises that he was going after the wrong man. This forces Griffin to try and cover up his crime, whilst avoiding being exposed in an investigation conducted by Detective Avery (played by Whoopi Goldberg). He also has to deal with a rival for his job, whilst conducting a romance with David’s widow June Gudmundsdottir (played by Greta Scacchi)


5 Screenwriting Lessons – The Player

(The Following May Contain Spoilers)


Demonstrate Movie Knowledge – The Player relies heavily on “in-jokes”, which can be understood by those with an advanced knowledge of movies. One of these is a reference to the successful erotic thriller Fatal Attraction. Shortly after Griffin kills David, we hear an executive mention the fact that the movie’s ending was changed as a result of audience feedback. The specifics of this change are not mentioned in the scene, but Fatal Attraction’s initial, darker, ending was replaced by a more mainstream climax in which the protagonist kills his unhinged stalker in a fight in the bathroom. This allusion has two purposes. First of all, it reflects the action we have just seen, implying that Griffin’s actions will have far greater repercussions then they do in the movies. It also sets up the changes that the studio will make to their movie Habeas Corpus, demonstrating that they will always put audience approval before creative freedom, therefore establishing a major theme of the movie. As a result, a seemingly innocuous piece of movie trivia that reflects the Hollywood execs’ obsession with movies turns out to be significant for both the characters and the story.

There are also a number of in-jokes which do not pertain directly to the plot, but instead focus on the large number of celebrities who cameoed. Sixty actors, 12 of whom were Oscar winners, made cameos in the movie, and there are a number of allusions to their fame, for example a scene in which Griffin is accosted by Malcom MacDowell, an actor famous for playing threatening characters in violent movies such as A Clockwork Orange. This adds a degree of realism to the movie, as fictional characters are interacting with these celebrities as if they were real people in their world as well, and the dialogue between the characters and celebrities would feel plausible in Hollywood. However, this gimmick also adds to the artifice inherent in the story. Even when an actor is playing a character within the film, their celebrity status is made clear throughout. Detective Avery is introduced holding an Oscar, a reference to Whoopi Goldberg’s win for her role in the movie Ghost, which occurred just a year before The Player was released. The large number of stars making gratuitous appearances reflects the belief that Hollywood movies rely too much on star power, but at the same time, The Player takes this convention to its logical extremes.

Meta-humour Can Be Easy to Understand – Meta-humour is a term used for comedy that is about the telling of jokes, and the use of jokes about filmmaking in The Player is key to its irreverent approach. The opening scene depicts everyday life on the backlot of a typical Hollywood studio. It moves between various execs discussing movies, studio tours, and pitches being conducted in the rooms overlooking the space, with all these elements being shown in a single eight-minute shot. The scene introduces the characters of Griffin and Bonnie, and establishes the former as the protagonist by setting up the threat to his job, and ending with him receiving his first poison pen letter. The unusual nature of this introduction is highlighted by two employees discussing Hollywood’s obsession with constant cuts, and talking about similar single-take openings, such as the beginning of the classic movie Touch of Evil. This sets up the “Postmodern” tone of the movie, in which the reality of Hollywood is deconstructed to reveal that the movie studios are just as artificial as the films they make.  

The ending is another example of meta-humour, as it proves that The Player is set in a world guided by movie conventions instead of more sensible outcomes. In the final scene, Griffin receives one last call from his blackmailer, who presents the story of Griffin’s crime and escape in the form of a pitch, and promises to provide a Hollywood ending for him “if the price is right”. This is followed by Griffin’s return to June, and the closing lines of the film are the same as the closing lines that follow Habeas Corpus’ tacked-on happy ending (“What took you so long?” “Traffic was a Bitch”). This demonstrates that the resolution of the movie is primarily based on the audience’s desire for a completely happy ending. In providing one for Griffin despite his actions, the film aims to make viewers question the ease with which it was attained, and therefore point out how problematic a formulaic Hollywood ending can be when applied to a situation where it’s undeserved.

Increase Suspense – The Player climaxes with a scene in which Griffin is put in a police line-up, and has to avoid being identified as David’s killer by a witness. As the detectives move through each of the suspects in turn, the tension is increased by the inexorable progress of the procedure, as it is already clear that Detective Avery believes that Griffin is guilty of first-degree murder. This puts him at a disadvantage, and leaves the audience wondering how he will manage to escape. Therefore, when the witness identifies the wrong person as the culprit, it is easy for the viewer to feel Griffin’s relief, in spite of the fact he has just gotten away with murder, as the outcome he had expected and feared is avoided in dramatic fashion.

Another tense scene occurs at the end of the first act, and Griffin goes to Dave’s house to try and find him. His call is intercepted by June, and, as he talks to her, he tries to spy on her through the window whilst avoiding detection. Although David is out of the house, the risk of being exposed by June could ruin Griffin’s chances of creating peace with him and ending the increasingly vicious threats that he has been receiving. Furthermore, as Griffin talks to June, he begins to develop feelings for her, and the prospect of this makes reconciliation with David even less likely. Putting a character in jeopardy is a good way of making the audience interested in them, and the threat Griffin faces, whilst mostly his own fault, is serious enough for most viewers to relate to his desire to be free of it.

Focus on Primal Issues – Griffin is a notable example of an antihero who can interest the audience in spite of his unlikeable behaviour. Even before he kills David, he is demanding specific brands of water from a waiter, and complaining when it is served in a wine glass as opposed to a more traditional one. However, when he commits the murder that should make audiences hate him even more, it is a panic-based accident. Because the circumstances in which the crime was committed are easy to understand, the audiences becomes interested in seeing whether or not Griffin can avoid the murder conviction which he now faces.

One example of the emphasis on basic feelings that can be understood by all viewers is the subplot focusing on the making of a legal thriller called Habeas Corpus. The script is depicted as being very pretentious, relying almost entirely on its bleak denouement, and the enthusiasm with which the writers accept the happy ending imposed on it at the end reveals that their focus on making a “serious” movie was little more than a marketing gimmick to attract audience attention. However, for all its melodrama, the basic concept of Habeas Corpus (a prosecutor tries to get an innocent woman executed in a bid to subvert Capital Punishment statistics) is highly dramatic and therefore intriguing. As a result, it feels like a movie that Hollywood could conceivably make (Michael Tolkin was allegedly approached to turn it into a real film), and this increases both the realism of the world in which the Hollywood executives operate, and the accuracy of the satire.

Understand the Realities of the Industry – With its emphasis on the realities of Hollywood, The Player places a significant amount of focus on role of screenwriters in the movie industry. The opening scene features a lot of screenwriters pitching stories with outlandish premises that can be summed up by comparing two existing movies; For example, When Griffin receives his first threat, he is listening to a pitch describing a story as “Ghost meets The Manchurian Candidate”. This simplistic style of pitching grabs the attention, but makes the movies seem highly formulaic, establishing that Griffin and the other executives would rather have a marketable film than an original one.

There are also a number of instances where excerpts from screenplays are read out loud. Bonnie reads a poorly-written, mechanical, sex scene from a popular script to Griffin, whilst the writers of Habeas Corpus begin their pitch with short sharp sentences and vivid descriptions that attract Griffin’s attention, but highlight the ostentatious nature of the project. The Player is primarily focused on storytelling, but the way in which a script is written reflects the approach the writers are taking to their material. Even though the screenwriting industry is portrayed in a rather unflattering light, the observation that storytelling is one of the most important aspects of a movie can be highly valuable to anyone trying to write a strong script.

Summary


The Player is a great example of a satire that can be highly vicious towards its primary target, the people working for the movie industry in Hollywood, but is light-hearted enough to be enjoyed by them as well. It uses creative meta-humour, and manages to be intriguing and suspenseful enough to catch the audience’s attention, in spite of the unlikeable protagonist. However, the most important reason for The Player’s success as a satire is its knowledge of the movie industry and the aggressive manner in which it operates. This provides the film with a level of insight that is just as relevant today as it was upon its release in 1992. As a result of this, The Player is an especially good film to watch if you’re familiar with the movie industry, as any budding screenwriter should be.

Sunday, 21 December 2014

5 Screenwriting Lessons – Moulin Rouge!


Who Wrote It?

Moulin Rouge was written by Baz Lurhman and Craig Pearce.

How Long is It?

Moulin Rouge is 122 minutes long, including credits.

What’s It About?

Moulin Rouge is set in 1899 and follows Christian (played by Ewan McGregor), an English writer who heads to the Montmartre district in Paris seeking inspiration from. Once there, he befriends a group of Bohemian performers led by the eccentric Toulouse-Lautrec (played by John Leguizamo) and gets involved in their production “Spectacular Spectacular”. Preparing to pitch the play to Harold Zidler (played by Jim Broadbent), the impresario in charge of the Moulin Rouge nightclub, Christian falls in love with Satine (played by Nicole Kidman), a performer and courtesan who works at the venue. However, the Moulin Rogue’s primary patron, a scheming Duke (played by Richard Roxburgh), wants Satine for himself, and the combination of his interference and Satine’s declining health ensure that Christian’s belief in true love will be severely tested.

5 Screenwriting Lessons – Moulin Rouge
(The Following May Contain Spoilers)

Find A Consistent Tone – After its downbeat opening, which sets up the tragedy of the third act, Moulin Rouge quickly transitions towards the comedic tone that dominates the first half of the film. One of the wackiest scenes is the introduction of Zidler. It is hard to take him seriously when he is introduced performing a rap with lines such as “Outside it may be raining/But in here it’s entertaining!” during a sequence in which “Lady Marmalade” and “Smells Like Teen Spirit” are sang simultaneously by the female and the male dancers at the Moulin Rouge. However, the kitsch, camp approach of the early scenes is replaced by numbers such as “El Tango De Roxanne” which are staged in a dark and restrained manner, fitting the jealousy and distrust that begins to affect Christian’s view of Satine. The dissonance between these two approaches highlight the excesses of the period and the significance of Christian and Satine’s relationship, but also create an unbalanced tone, because it is hard to enjoy the comedy when tragedy is inevitable, and the silly nature of earlier scenes distracts from the importance of later ones.

The change from a comedic approach to a serious one is epitomised in the handling of the female lead, Satine. When she interacts with Christian in her room towards the end of the first act, she makes some rather unsubtle advances towards him, and derives a substantial amount of sexual ecstasy from hearing lines of his poetry. This is followed by a scene where she tries to hide Christian’s presence from the Duke whilst simultaneously seducing him further. These moments would be well-suited to a farce or screwball comedy, and classics of the genre such as A Fish Called Wanda have used similar set pieces to generate a considerable amount of laughs. However, after she and Christian fall in love, Satine turns into a tragic figure. Her struggles with tuberculosis (known as consumption at the time) have been established by this point, but as the disease takes its toll, the depiction of her becomes far more serious. The scene in which she tells Christian that she cannot see him again features a deception that contrasts sharply with her earlier one, as she tries to hide the fact that the real motive for her actions is to protect Christian from the Duke. In contrast to the uninhibited behaviour she demonstrated earlier on, she is very quiet and solemn, which proves that the events she has been through have had a considerable impact on her. This transformation in her character reflects the sombre nature of the second half, and the increased difficulty of sustaining the idyllic relationship with Christian.

Understand the Importance of Fairy Tales– Although it is set in Paris during 1899 and features the iconic painter Toulouse-Lautrec as a central character, Moulin Rouge makes little use of its time period. The only other reference to contemporary France is a brief mention of the French actress Sarah Bernhardt, whilst significant political events such as the Dreyfus Affair go unmentioned. This is done to highlight the timelessness of Christian and Satine’s story. Focusing too much on wider events would make the film about the time period rather than the story and messages it provides. The appeal of a compelling story and a strong message have helped fairy tales to endure centuries after their initial publication, and Moulin Rouge exploits these important aspects in order to ensure that it is just as durable.

Another way in which the story reflects classic fairy tales is through Christian’s show. He and the rest of the personnel behind “Spectacular Spectacular” improvise a story about a courtesan in ancient India, torn between a poor Sitar player and a wealthy Maharajah. The parallels to the existing love triangle between Christian, Satine and the Duke are apparent throughout, and the message that goodness and optimism will triumph reflects the worldview of the protagonists. In the second half of the film, the Duke is alerted to the similarities between the story of the play and his current situation, and decides to change the ending to one where the courtesan ends up with the Maharajah. He defends this alteration by claiming that it is more realistic, but, at the climax of the film, Christian invades the play, eventually managing to defeat the Duke and giving “Spectacular Spectacular” its happy ending. The typical fairy tale provides a fantasy that defies the harsh and cynical nature of the world to present a hopeful and idealised vision of love, in line with the views of Christian and his friends. By proving that this fantasy can triumph over the conventions of reality, the film highlights its value in the modern world.

Music is Key – Christian’s status as a writer is integral to the film’s story. Although the writing he does at the beginning is very traditional, he soon demonstrates an unusual talent for improvising songs. He earns a job as a playwright by helping Toulouse-Lautrec and his troupe write “The Sound of Music”, and wins over Satine with a rendition of “Your Song”. The reason for using songs that would not exist until decades later is to make the film seem more relevant to modern audiences whilst further distancing it from its time period. Because both “The Sound of Music” and “Your Song” fit the character singing them and the context in which he does so, they feel like appropriate songs for the situation. The incongruity between the time period and the music highlight the impact of the latter, as the songs are powerful enough to be applied to an unusual time whilst not feeling out of place. This proves that Christian and Satine’s relationship is not based on the conventions of the time, but the emotions and sensations which inspired the music they sing.

One of the most notable musical numbers in the movie is the “Elephant Love Medley”. In this sequence, Christian sings lines from a wide range of songs, including tracks by the Beatles, U2, and Dolly Parton, in an attempt to serenade Satine. At the beginning, Satine starts out with a cynical outlook, but soon the tone changes, as she begins to engage in the duet with Christian. A rendition of David Bowie’s “Heroes” represents the main turning point, as the two sing together for the first time at the chorus, instead of merely addressing lyrics to one another. Satine’s decision to embrace the defiance and naive optimism conveyed by the lyrics of “Heroes” proves that she is in love with Christian and willing to discard the pragmatic approach that had previously defined her. The gradual change in emotion makes Satine’s love for Christian seem more credible, as it indicates that her primary reason for loving him is his personality rather than his looks.

Create Memorable Characters – Moulin Rouge’s characters are mostly stereotypical – Christian is the wide-eyed innocent, Satine is a beautiful diva torn between dreams of acting and her love for Christian, and the Duke is a moustache-twirling villain. The Bohemians are defined by a handful of traits, with only Toulouse-Lautrec and a narcoleptic Argentine strongman having a substantial amount of lines. The characters are simplistic in nature, but their quirks are emphasised throughout the film, allowing them to stand out. This lack of complexity works to the movie’s advantage, as it reinforces the fairy-tale approach, with characters who are purely good and purely bad. As a result, the film is able to place more emphasis on its main selling points, namely its visuals, music and message.

Make your Visuals Colourful – Moulin Rouge opens with a scene in black-and-white, stylized like a silent movie, in which Toulouse-Lautrec sings the song “Nature Boy” whilst peering out of an open window. As the camera goes through the streets of the Montmarte suburbs, the colours, particularly the shades of red, become increasingly apparent, and by the time we are introduced to Christian, writing about the events of the movie, the visuals are now in full colour. The purpose of the sequence is to transition from the artifice of the black-and-white sequence to the reality of Christian’s story. This means that the audience become immediately involved in his tale, and, as a result, are far more engaged in it than they would be if the opening did not have such an immersive effect.

The use of colour to reflect emotional states is also apparent in “Spectacular Spectacular”, as it is staged for the first time during the climax. Bollywood musicals were a major inspiration behind Moulin Rouge, and this is indicated through the bright colours, gaudy costumes and elaborate stunts that define the genre and are in full display during the performance. Another example of the visuals matching the tone of the story occurs when Santine’s character appears in the production. In Satine’s scenes, the colour is replaced by dark blue lighting and a spotlight focusing on her. This conveys a shift towards a darker tone, as the character she plays sells herself to the Maharajah, and reflects the growing intensity of the movie, as Christian tries to find Satine in order to break up with her, whilst evading the Duke’s henchman. As a result of the ominous mood created by the colour change, the scene turns highly suspenseful, as the chances of Christian rekindling his relationship with Satine become increasingly remote.

Conclusion

Moulin Rouge is full of flaws, but enjoyable nonetheless. The characters are stereotypes, and the film alternates between over-the-top comedy and grand romantic tragedy when it should have prioritised one of those approaches. However, Moulin Rouge is focused on its visuals, soundtrack and story, and these are all very good. Whilst the visuals are unusually bright and the soundtrack is unusually modern, the basic story is inherently appealing, and, for all the excess surrounding it, is conveyed very well. Therefore, it manages to succeed in its primary purpose of being a modern-day fairy tale.

Monday, 15 December 2014

5 Screenwriting Lessons – Croupier

Who Wrote It?

Croupier was written by Paul Mayersberg.

How Long is It?

Croupier is 94 minutes long, including credits.

What’s It About?

Croupier follows Jack Manfred (Played by Clive Owen), an aspiring writer seeking to create a successful novel. On the advice of his father, he gets a job as a croupier in a seedy London casino. His experiences provide him with plenty of material, but his relationship with his girlfriend Marion (Played by Gina McKee) comes under strain. Furthermore, Jack gets involved in affairs with two women: the cynical dealer Bella (Played by Kate Hardie), and the mysterious Jani (Played by Alex Kingston), thus violating one of the central rules of the casino – Never talk to the other croupiers or the players.

5 Screenwriting Lessons – Croupier
(The Following May Contain Spoilers)

Get into the Protagonist’s Head – One of the most important aspects of the film is Jack’s Voice-over, which he provides in the third person, as if he were narrating his own story. This serves two purposes. First of all, it sets up Jack’s obsession with writing, as he is aiming to make his narrative seem as dramatic as possible. This sets up the theme of duplicity, as he is hiding his knowledge and observations from the unsuspecting gamblers at the table. Because of this, the audience is left wondering how many secrets Jack conceals, and how relevant these will be to the story. Furthermore, the use of Voice-over also makes the viewer interested in seeing what happens to him. Jack is an aloof character, and needs to be depicted in an accessible manner in order to be worth following. By allowing him a way to communicate with the audience in a manner that retains his introverted personality, but permits an insight into how he really feels, the script succeeds in doing this.

Jack’s desire to craft an appealing narrative is consistent throughout the story. At a party with Jani and his publisher, he offers to deal the cards in a round of poker, and gives everyone an increasingly impressive hand, with Jani winning. From this, it is possible to sense the fact that he has feelings for her, but also that he is interested in the world of the casino because he the thrill of watching the gamblers blow a fortune far more fascinating than anything his publisher wants him to write. This fascination with victory and defeat is the main motivation for his actions at the party. Although Jack ditches the stifling world of publishing in favour of his job on the casino floor at the end of the movie, he retains his fascination with observing the world around him. The fact that Jack is defined by this very common and interesting trait allows him to be a compelling anti-hero.

Simple Things Can be Very Interesting – In the third act, Jack gets himself implicated in a robbery by Jani. She offers to pay him if he provides a distraction on the casino floor. All he needs to do is call out a cheater at his table, which he had done earlier in the movie. The fact that the entire robbery hinges on something that Jack normally does without hesitation increases suspense because the plan is too perfect; it involves attaining large rewards with very little effort. If such a routine action has such significant consequences, then the audience can expect the possibility that something must go wrong. The inevitability that their suspicions will be proven correct encourages them to keep watching, as they want to know what will happen to prevent the plan from working.

Give Characters Unique Personalities – Croupier contains three distinctive female characters, Marion, Bella and Jani. All of them have their personalities developed in a simple and effective manner. Marion is introduced via Voice-over with classical music playing in the background, Bella is first seen undressing in a mirror behind Jack, and Jani is a particularly alluring customer at the tables, standing out due to her expensive look and her confident behaviour. As a result of these vivid and contrasting quirks, this group of characters manage to seem unique and developed in spite of the film’s short runtime.

Jack’s father is also introduced in a manner that conveys his mischievous personality. Whilst Jack is struggling for inspiration, he receives a call from his father recommending that he gets a job at a casino. Jack Sr.’s fast and energetic tone contrasts sharply with Jack’s slow and deliberate style of speaking. The viewer can sense that they are in some sort of conflict, as the two are very different in spite of their family relationship. This generates a number of interesting questions. How did Jack and his father drift so far apart, and will there will be any developments that provide further insight into them? The desire to see these questions answered entices the audience to continue watching.

The Audience Should Be Allowed to Observe Things with the Characters–Initially, Jack is unwilling to take up his father’s job offer, but over the course of the film, he gains an increasing affinity for the world of the casino. His natural ability to function in the casino environment is set up in his first scene there, in which he demonstrates his skills as a croupier. Instantly, he observes that the casino is not replacing chips as often as it should, and passes a test of his dealing skills with flying colours. This shows that he understands the basics of gambling better than the people in charge, and this advantage generates both inspiration for his story and the increasing addiction to the atmosphere of the casino.

Little details can serve to develop characters, but they can also generate suspense. Jani reveals the robbery to Jack in a lavish party in a country house. When she takes him, she has her arm in a cast, and tells Jack that it is because she owes a debt to some mysterious enemies, providing an effective pretext to get Jack involved. The next time we see Jani, her injury has healed. However, a bad bruise which Jack gained in a brawl with a disgruntled gambler remains. The viewer can figure out that Jani was faking her injuries and cannot be trusted. This sets up the intriguing mystery of what her real motivations are, and the prospect of finding these out drives the climax.

Make Your World Unique – One of the most unique features of Croupier is the fact that it is based in London, as opposed to a more traditional gambling location such as Las Vegas or Atlantic City. This allows it to demonstrate a different approach to the subgenre of gambling-based movies, whilst providing truths about that industry which are equally applicable in all casinos everywhere. The wide variety of London scenery is used throughout the film. Key interactions with Bella and Jani take place in Piccadilly, a particularly affluent area of the city. The juxtaposition of the vast spaces there and the drab, confined casino highlights the artifice inherent in the latter location. It relies on extravagance just as much as the expensive London shops, but the casino and its employees do not have the ability to make this seem natural, and, as a result, the seediness and desperation that the place relies on is emphasised instead of concealed.

There is also substantial focus on the life behind the tables. Given the cold and formal manner in which croupiers are expected to conduct themselves, their behaviour once their shift is over is revealing. Many of the dealers frequent a club ran by one of the customers – a clear violation of the rules established at the start of the film. The casino is required to project an image of efficiency and professionalism, in order to encourage patrons to gamble away as much money as possible, and this forces the employees to hide their true personalities. Jack’s ability at doing this allows him to thrive in the casino environment.

Conclusion

Although often regarded as a Thriller due to its neo-noir style, Croupier is closer to a character-based Drama. In spite of its short runtime, it manages to create a cast of characters who are memorable and engaging in spite of their unsympathetic nature, and its focus on the mundane reality of ordinary casinos is unique, generating a number of fascinating insights. There is also a significant attention to detail, with the most ordinary things being depicted in a manner that can grab the audience’s attention and arouse their curiosity. This means that Croupier is worth a watch, as it proves that even the shortest movies can be complex and elaborate without becoming boring or incoherent.

5 Screenwriting Lessons – The Imitation Game

Who Wrote It?

The Imitation Game was written by Graham Moore, and based on the book Alan Turing: The Enigma, written by Andrew Hodges.

How Long is It?

The Imitation Game is 114 minutes long, including credits.

What’s It About?

The Imitation Game tells the story of Alan Turing (played by Benedict Cumberbatch), a gifted mathematician who gained a job as a codebreaker during the Second World War. Hired to decrypt messages sent by the Germans using the Enigma coding machine, he annoys his superiors with his anti-social manner, but soon comes up with an elaborate machine to crack the Enigma code. The film also deals with Turing’s homosexuality, illegal in Britain during his lifetime, his ill-fated relationship with fellow code breaker Joan Clarke (played by Kiera Knightley), his arrest for “Gross indecency” in 1952, and his eventual suicide.

5 Screenwriting Lessons- The Imitation Game
(The Following May Contain Spoilers)

Use Flashbacks and Flash-forwards – The Imitation Game begins in 1952, with police responding to the break-in that would expose Turing’s sexuality and lead to his arrest. The initial meeting is full of foreshadowing that sets up Turing’s downfall. When the detectives investigating the case first see him, he is cleaning up poisonous chemicals. As well as foreshadowing his suicide, which is not depicted in the film itself, it sets up Turing’s awkward and unsociable nature, which create as many obstacles for him as his homosexuality does. The subsequent interrogation of Turing provides a framing device for his narration. The detective conducting it, Detective Nock, serves as a stand-in for the audience, as he listens to the narration and gains an increased understanding of Turing as a person. This technique is used to emphasise the secrecy involved in Turing’s life, as the story he tells was known only to those directly involved at the time. In recent years, the tale has become more familiar, but the depiction of a time when it wasn’t highlights the levels of mystery that defined both Turing and the project in which he was involved.

As well as the scenes set after the war, there are also a number of flashbacks to Turing’s past as a student at a boarding-school. These serve to develop his character in a number of ways. He is implied to have Asperger’s syndrome or a similar condition, which manifests itself in his obsession with separating peas and carrots in his school dinner. This leads to him being mercilessly bullied by a number of fellow students, and sets up the fact that he is a misfit who nobody is able to understand. The flashbacks also depicts his friendship with, and growing attraction towards, Christopher, an older student who introduces him to the world of cryptanalysis. This ensures that he is a more relatable protagonist, and provides motivation for his actions throughout the rest of the film.

If A Line of Dialogue is Significant, Echo It Later - There are a number of instances in the film where a minor detail or exchange is used again later to emphasise its effect. Some of these are comedic in nature. For example, when Turing is hard at work designing his decryption machine, he refuses a request to go out for lunch, claiming that he dislikes sandwiches. Later, one of his fellow codebreakers steals a sandwich from him, citing this earlier comment when doing so. Though the sequence is entirely humorous, it demonstrates that Turing’s colleagues are ambivalent in their opinions of him. They accept his skills, but still regard him as a loner and therefore treat him in a disrespectful manner. This indicates that Turing is yet to fully win the approval of his team, and provides a personal motive for Turing to succeed, in addition to the wider need to save Britain.
However, the majority of echoes in the story are far more direct. One significant line is “Sometimes it is the people no one imagines anything of who do the things no one can imagine.” This is used three times in the movie. It is first used Christopher, then Turing himself, and finally Joan in the last scene. This reflects and reinforces the message of the movie, which is that the Second World War was not won on the battlefield, but by an introverted mathematician who was “agnostic” towards violence. The contrast between Turing’s anonymous nature and his highly valuable contribution is inherently fascinating, and this is at the heart of both the quote and the movie itself.

Protagonists Don’t Have to be Likeable – The film places a significant amount of focus on Alan Turing’s flaws. He was anti-social, overconfident, obtuse and lacking inhibition. These traits are made particularly apparent in his interview with Commander Denniston, the head of Britain’s Government Code and Cipher School, the organisation for which Turing worked. For example, he tells Dennison “You would need me a lot more than I need you.” The purpose of an interview is usually to win over the person conducting it, but Turing’s blunt comments show that he regards himself as being superior to Dennison, which is hardly an endearing statement to make in such a serious context. However, because Turing’s judgements turned out to be correct, the audience are on his side, because they are aware that he will be an essential member of the team and hope Denniston will recognise this. Turing’s confidence in his abilities make him a compelling character, and this ensures that the audience more inclined to follow him and see what effects his positive and negative characteristics have on his success.

Use the Period – The majority of the film takes place during the Second World War, and this creates a significant degree of tension. The extent of the threat posed by the Germans and their apparent invulnerability makes Turing and the codebreakers seem like underdogs, and this is highlighted through the menacing depiction of German ships and planes advancing on their enemies. Furthermore, they represented a more immediate threat through “The Blitz”, their bombing campaign against British cities. The attacks are depicted in a quick montage which focuses on the effect that they had on the ordinary British public. This conveys how destructive the conflict was and raises the stakes – If Turing and his team don’t succeed, Britain might be destroyed. Due to the distance between the codebreakers, based in the country estate Bletchley Park, and the battlefields on which the war was fought, the decision to show the impact of the fighting on those directly involved creates an increased sense of urgency, and this is what forces the team at Bletchley Park to work together in order to find the secret behind the Enigma machine as quickly as they can.

The German’s apparent dominance soon becomes an advantage for Turing, but this generates an ethical dilemma. After he succeeds in cracking the Enigma machine, the British now have a complete understanding of German strategy throughout the world. However, Turing realises that if this advantage is revealed, it would undo all the progress he has made. Therefore, he chooses not to warn the British government about an impending attack on a ship.  Even though one of his fellow codebreakers has a brother on board the doomed vessel, Turing stands by his decision. Although this is a pretty unlikely coincidence, it does highlight the effects that concealing all knowledge of German activities had. Because the depiction of the code breaking process omits almost all developments after Turing’s breakthrough, the story needs to find another way of demonstrating the obstacles the codebreakers faced from this point, and highlighting the problems generated by the newfound insight into German activities provides a striking way of doing this.

Relationships are Key – The story of the Imitation Game is structured around Turing’s relationship with Clarke. The first act ends with Turing inviting her to join the codebreakers at Bletchley Park, his decision to propose to her occurs at the midpoint of the story, and the second act ends with the revelation of his sexuality.  This is important because whilst the cracking of Enigma was a significant event, the majority of the process saw Turing use skills that he already possessed, namely his tenacity and mathematical knowledge. In contrast, his relationship with Joan forces him to change as a character and develop a close relationship with another person – his inability to do so is at the centre of his personality. This growth not only makes him into a more developed character, it enables him to enjoy greater success. For all his prowess as a mathematician, it is being able to listen to others provides Turing with the information needed to solve the German code.  Biographical dramas can risk emphasising facts over character, and by focusing on Turing’s inability to interact with his team, the script creates a story that can be applied to any time or place, but is enhanced by the people and events involved.

Verdict

The Imitation Game succeeds as a biopic because it focuses on characters instead of events. The Second World War is kept firmly in the background, and the focus in in Alan Turing himself. He is a highly flawed character, but has enough relatable traits to make him a protagonist worth rooting for. The period is well depicted, and the flashbacks and flash forwards are incorporated into the story effectively. The dialogue is strong, and in spite of the lack of action, the various conflicts Turing and other characters face are engaging. The screenplay provides a solid foundation for a talented cast and crew, and this is the main reason why the film is a prominent contender in this years’ awards season.

Sunday, 12 October 2014

5 Screenwriting Lessons – Pride



Who Wrote It?

Pride was written by Steven Beresford.

How Long is It?

Pride is 120 minutes long, including credits.

What’s It About?

Pride is based on the true story of the LGSM (Lesbians and Gays Support the Miners) group that operated during the British miners’ strike of 1984-5. It is founded when a group of gay activists, including the young rebel Mark Ashton (Played by Ben Schnetzer) , the flamboyant Johnathan Blake (Played by Dominic West) and the inexperienced Joe (Played by George MacKay), come together during a Gay Pride demonstration and decide to raise money to help the fight the British government’s attempts to close the country’s mines. After numerous failed attempts to find support from the British Union of Mineworkers, the LGSM are allowed to come to the small Welsh mining town of Onllwyn to promote their cause. Once there, they make an impression on the initially reluctant townsfolk, and gain a number of friends, such as Dai (Played by Paddy Constantine) and housewife Sian (Played by Jessica Gunning). However the homophobic attitudes prevalent throughout Britain at the time, coupled with the difficulties that the miners face as their strike progresses, ensure that the LGSM’s cause appears doomed.

5 Screenwriting Lessons – Pride
(The Following May Contain Spoilers)

Every Character Should Stand Out – Pride contains a large cast of characters, all of whom are depicted in a vivid and memorable manner. The initial focus is on the individual members of the LGSM. Joe, who refers to himself as “Bromley” until the climax of the film, is unsure of his sexuality. Mark is a provocative radical, whilst Johnathan’s partner Gethin is more grounded and less flamboyant than other members of the group. All the members are given a number of strengths and weaknesses; for example, Mark is shown to become a bit too self-centred as the LGSM gain prominence.  As a result of this nuanced portrayal, the characters always seem real, enhancing the legitimacy of the story and increasing the viewer’s interest in it.

The diversity of the cast is also showcased in the village of Onllwyn. The inhabitants all have different outlooks and different reactions to their unlikely supporters. Dai is the first person to meet the LGSM, and takes to their approach quickly, giving an introductory speech for them at a gay club in London. Sian is the one who undergoes the strongest character arc, as she transforms from an ordinary housewife into one of the LGSM’s strongest and most helpful supporters. Maureen is the nearest thing to a human antagonist in the story (the main opponents are the background forces of Margret Thatcher’s Conservative government and the institutions that supported it) as she refuses to let go of her homophobia and clings onto her belief that the LGSM are only out for themselves. This wide range of responses from this cast of supporting characters allows the film to reflect the wider views of society at large, acknowledging the fact that those aiming to bring about change, such as the LGSM, will always have to face up to intolerance from individuals, but their ability to open up the minds of the wider community is all that matters.

Portray the Past Effectively – The film begins with stock footage depicting the protests that occurred during the miners’ strike. Miners are depicted engaging in peaceful rebellions and being attacked by the police, and we soon switch from this succinct introduction to scenes depicting the strike on the news as Mark watches. This sets up the main subject of the story, in which the rebellious masses will take on the might of the government. Whilst the strike is merely in the background, as the film zeroes in on a small group of people involved, it serves to mobilise the plot and the protagonists driving it, and is therefore a vital part of the story.

The effects of the miners’ strike also increase our understanding of the characters. The destitution experienced by the strikers and their families is conveyed in a manner that can be remembered by those who experienced it, and understood by the viewers who did not. At the Onllwyn village hall, the main prize in the bingo games is a tin of corned beef. This is usually regarded as a cheap item that few would eat out of choice, but the fact that it is such a valuable prize highlights how desperate the inhabitants are, and how they are trying to make the best of their situation.  The best way of depicting an important event such as the miners’ strike is to depict realistic characters coping with the effects of it in a truthful manner, and Pride succeeds in doing this.

Subplots Are an Integral Part of Any Film – Within the overarching story of the LGSM’s attempts to bring attention to the causes of both the miners and the LGBT community, there are a number of smaller subplots. The most prominent of these concerns Joe, whose conservative parents want him to study in a catering college. However, he actually wants to be a photographer, and struggles to see eye-to-eye with them. Over the course of the film, Joe learns to be more assertive and accept his sexuality, and his parent’s failure to understand this increases his desire to be independent. This struggle with adversity gives the story a human focus, and reflects the main theme of being open about your orientation even in the face of considerable opposition.

The message about being proud of yourself is also apparent in two secondary subplots. The first of these concerns Gethin, who tries to rekindle his relationship with his Christian mother. The other one follows Cliff, a respected member of the Onllwyn community, who eventually reveals that he is gay. In both cases, the characters decisions are accepted by those close to them. In spite of the ultimate failure of the miners’ strike, the overall tone of Pride is a triumphant one, and Gethin and Cliff’s ability to come out reflects this.

Changes in Mood Should Feel Natural – Pride has to balance both comedic and dramatic elements, and does this by contrasting them; an upbeat sequence will be followed by a serious setback that hinders the protagonists. Therefore, the emotional high of acceptance from the community is followed by the reveal that Maureen has told the tabloids about the LGSM’s presence, and the heartwarming scene in which Gethin’s mother comes to visit him in hospital, completing the subplot depicting their reconciliation, is followed by Johnathan’s admission that he is HIV positive. This alternation between increasingly positive and increasingly negative events creates a growing progression, and ensures that, instead of seeming like a constant stream of events, the film flows naturally, with a story that can follow the beats of a conventional screenplay structure perfectly.

The brutal nature of homophobia in the 80’s is summed up by an attack on Gethin that leaves him hospitalised as he goes out on his own to ask for donations. Whilst it is not actually shown, it is foreshadowed skilfully, with the warning that the LGSM members should stay together when trying to collect funds, and the attacks on Gethin’s bookshop earlier in the film. This ensures that when the lighting dims and the score turns ominous, the viewer can figure out what is going to happen without having to see it. As a result, the film is successfully able to depict the reality of homophobic violence without the jarring deviation from its overall tone that would have resulted from actually showing it.

Be Energetic - Pride’s approach and tone is reflected in its soundtrack, which is a mixture of protest songs and up-tempo 80’s pop. However, the music is more than just a way of setting the mood. It becomes particularly important during “Pits and Perverts”, a benefit concert set up by the LGSM in response to vicious articles from the pro-government tabloids. Enlisting the services of the electronic pop act Bronski Beat, they manage to gain large amounts of attention for their cause and money for the people of Onllwyn. This marks a significant milestone in the story, as a group of amateur activists founded only a few months before are able to recruit the services of band who, at the time, were one of the most popular acts in Britain. The ambition of the LGSM highlights their commitment to their twin causes, and shows that they are gaining increasing popularity and prestige as a result of this. Music is an important part of modern life, and the LGSM’s ability to connect with it allows them a simple and appealing way of proving that minority groups can make a difference.

Conclusion

Pride provides a unique perspective on one of the most important events in modern British history. It provides a wide range of characters who are defined clearly enough to stand out, but depicted in a manner that allows them to seem like real people instead of stereotypes. It makes good use of the period in which it is set, embedding the culture of the time into the story seamlessly. Most importantly, it provides large amounts of comedy and drama without letting either dominate the film completely. Generally, Pride is a good example of how two complex genres, the historical drama and the ensemble comedy, can be combined in a manner that is both enjoyable and appealing for a wide audience.