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Tuesday, 20 January 2015

5 Screenwriting Lessons – The Player


Who Wrote It?


The Player was written by Michael Tolkin, and based on his novel of the same name.

How Long Is It?


The Player is 124 minutes long, including credits.

What’s It About?


The Player follows Griffin Mill (played by Tim Robbins), an executive at a film studio with the job of approving or rejecting the numerous scripts he sees. When he begins to receive threatening letters, he suspects David Kahane (played by Vincent D’Onofrio), a hot-tempered screenwriter whose idea he had dismissed in the past, of sending them, and goes to Pasadena to confront him. During a heated brawl, Griffin accidently kills David, but as the threats continue, he realises that he was going after the wrong man. This forces Griffin to try and cover up his crime, whilst avoiding being exposed in an investigation conducted by Detective Avery (played by Whoopi Goldberg). He also has to deal with a rival for his job, whilst conducting a romance with David’s widow June Gudmundsdottir (played by Greta Scacchi)


5 Screenwriting Lessons – The Player

(The Following May Contain Spoilers)


Demonstrate Movie Knowledge – The Player relies heavily on “in-jokes”, which can be understood by those with an advanced knowledge of movies. One of these is a reference to the successful erotic thriller Fatal Attraction. Shortly after Griffin kills David, we hear an executive mention the fact that the movie’s ending was changed as a result of audience feedback. The specifics of this change are not mentioned in the scene, but Fatal Attraction’s initial, darker, ending was replaced by a more mainstream climax in which the protagonist kills his unhinged stalker in a fight in the bathroom. This allusion has two purposes. First of all, it reflects the action we have just seen, implying that Griffin’s actions will have far greater repercussions then they do in the movies. It also sets up the changes that the studio will make to their movie Habeas Corpus, demonstrating that they will always put audience approval before creative freedom, therefore establishing a major theme of the movie. As a result, a seemingly innocuous piece of movie trivia that reflects the Hollywood execs’ obsession with movies turns out to be significant for both the characters and the story.

There are also a number of in-jokes which do not pertain directly to the plot, but instead focus on the large number of celebrities who cameoed. Sixty actors, 12 of whom were Oscar winners, made cameos in the movie, and there are a number of allusions to their fame, for example a scene in which Griffin is accosted by Malcom MacDowell, an actor famous for playing threatening characters in violent movies such as A Clockwork Orange. This adds a degree of realism to the movie, as fictional characters are interacting with these celebrities as if they were real people in their world as well, and the dialogue between the characters and celebrities would feel plausible in Hollywood. However, this gimmick also adds to the artifice inherent in the story. Even when an actor is playing a character within the film, their celebrity status is made clear throughout. Detective Avery is introduced holding an Oscar, a reference to Whoopi Goldberg’s win for her role in the movie Ghost, which occurred just a year before The Player was released. The large number of stars making gratuitous appearances reflects the belief that Hollywood movies rely too much on star power, but at the same time, The Player takes this convention to its logical extremes.

Meta-humour Can Be Easy to Understand – Meta-humour is a term used for comedy that is about the telling of jokes, and the use of jokes about filmmaking in The Player is key to its irreverent approach. The opening scene depicts everyday life on the backlot of a typical Hollywood studio. It moves between various execs discussing movies, studio tours, and pitches being conducted in the rooms overlooking the space, with all these elements being shown in a single eight-minute shot. The scene introduces the characters of Griffin and Bonnie, and establishes the former as the protagonist by setting up the threat to his job, and ending with him receiving his first poison pen letter. The unusual nature of this introduction is highlighted by two employees discussing Hollywood’s obsession with constant cuts, and talking about similar single-take openings, such as the beginning of the classic movie Touch of Evil. This sets up the “Postmodern” tone of the movie, in which the reality of Hollywood is deconstructed to reveal that the movie studios are just as artificial as the films they make.  

The ending is another example of meta-humour, as it proves that The Player is set in a world guided by movie conventions instead of more sensible outcomes. In the final scene, Griffin receives one last call from his blackmailer, who presents the story of Griffin’s crime and escape in the form of a pitch, and promises to provide a Hollywood ending for him “if the price is right”. This is followed by Griffin’s return to June, and the closing lines of the film are the same as the closing lines that follow Habeas Corpus’ tacked-on happy ending (“What took you so long?” “Traffic was a Bitch”). This demonstrates that the resolution of the movie is primarily based on the audience’s desire for a completely happy ending. In providing one for Griffin despite his actions, the film aims to make viewers question the ease with which it was attained, and therefore point out how problematic a formulaic Hollywood ending can be when applied to a situation where it’s undeserved.

Increase Suspense – The Player climaxes with a scene in which Griffin is put in a police line-up, and has to avoid being identified as David’s killer by a witness. As the detectives move through each of the suspects in turn, the tension is increased by the inexorable progress of the procedure, as it is already clear that Detective Avery believes that Griffin is guilty of first-degree murder. This puts him at a disadvantage, and leaves the audience wondering how he will manage to escape. Therefore, when the witness identifies the wrong person as the culprit, it is easy for the viewer to feel Griffin’s relief, in spite of the fact he has just gotten away with murder, as the outcome he had expected and feared is avoided in dramatic fashion.

Another tense scene occurs at the end of the first act, and Griffin goes to Dave’s house to try and find him. His call is intercepted by June, and, as he talks to her, he tries to spy on her through the window whilst avoiding detection. Although David is out of the house, the risk of being exposed by June could ruin Griffin’s chances of creating peace with him and ending the increasingly vicious threats that he has been receiving. Furthermore, as Griffin talks to June, he begins to develop feelings for her, and the prospect of this makes reconciliation with David even less likely. Putting a character in jeopardy is a good way of making the audience interested in them, and the threat Griffin faces, whilst mostly his own fault, is serious enough for most viewers to relate to his desire to be free of it.

Focus on Primal Issues – Griffin is a notable example of an antihero who can interest the audience in spite of his unlikeable behaviour. Even before he kills David, he is demanding specific brands of water from a waiter, and complaining when it is served in a wine glass as opposed to a more traditional one. However, when he commits the murder that should make audiences hate him even more, it is a panic-based accident. Because the circumstances in which the crime was committed are easy to understand, the audiences becomes interested in seeing whether or not Griffin can avoid the murder conviction which he now faces.

One example of the emphasis on basic feelings that can be understood by all viewers is the subplot focusing on the making of a legal thriller called Habeas Corpus. The script is depicted as being very pretentious, relying almost entirely on its bleak denouement, and the enthusiasm with which the writers accept the happy ending imposed on it at the end reveals that their focus on making a “serious” movie was little more than a marketing gimmick to attract audience attention. However, for all its melodrama, the basic concept of Habeas Corpus (a prosecutor tries to get an innocent woman executed in a bid to subvert Capital Punishment statistics) is highly dramatic and therefore intriguing. As a result, it feels like a movie that Hollywood could conceivably make (Michael Tolkin was allegedly approached to turn it into a real film), and this increases both the realism of the world in which the Hollywood executives operate, and the accuracy of the satire.

Understand the Realities of the Industry – With its emphasis on the realities of Hollywood, The Player places a significant amount of focus on role of screenwriters in the movie industry. The opening scene features a lot of screenwriters pitching stories with outlandish premises that can be summed up by comparing two existing movies; For example, When Griffin receives his first threat, he is listening to a pitch describing a story as “Ghost meets The Manchurian Candidate”. This simplistic style of pitching grabs the attention, but makes the movies seem highly formulaic, establishing that Griffin and the other executives would rather have a marketable film than an original one.

There are also a number of instances where excerpts from screenplays are read out loud. Bonnie reads a poorly-written, mechanical, sex scene from a popular script to Griffin, whilst the writers of Habeas Corpus begin their pitch with short sharp sentences and vivid descriptions that attract Griffin’s attention, but highlight the ostentatious nature of the project. The Player is primarily focused on storytelling, but the way in which a script is written reflects the approach the writers are taking to their material. Even though the screenwriting industry is portrayed in a rather unflattering light, the observation that storytelling is one of the most important aspects of a movie can be highly valuable to anyone trying to write a strong script.

Summary


The Player is a great example of a satire that can be highly vicious towards its primary target, the people working for the movie industry in Hollywood, but is light-hearted enough to be enjoyed by them as well. It uses creative meta-humour, and manages to be intriguing and suspenseful enough to catch the audience’s attention, in spite of the unlikeable protagonist. However, the most important reason for The Player’s success as a satire is its knowledge of the movie industry and the aggressive manner in which it operates. This provides the film with a level of insight that is just as relevant today as it was upon its release in 1992. As a result of this, The Player is an especially good film to watch if you’re familiar with the movie industry, as any budding screenwriter should be.

Monday, 15 December 2014

5 Screenwriting Lessons – Croupier

Who Wrote It?

Croupier was written by Paul Mayersberg.

How Long is It?

Croupier is 94 minutes long, including credits.

What’s It About?

Croupier follows Jack Manfred (Played by Clive Owen), an aspiring writer seeking to create a successful novel. On the advice of his father, he gets a job as a croupier in a seedy London casino. His experiences provide him with plenty of material, but his relationship with his girlfriend Marion (Played by Gina McKee) comes under strain. Furthermore, Jack gets involved in affairs with two women: the cynical dealer Bella (Played by Kate Hardie), and the mysterious Jani (Played by Alex Kingston), thus violating one of the central rules of the casino – Never talk to the other croupiers or the players.

5 Screenwriting Lessons – Croupier
(The Following May Contain Spoilers)

Get into the Protagonist’s Head – One of the most important aspects of the film is Jack’s Voice-over, which he provides in the third person, as if he were narrating his own story. This serves two purposes. First of all, it sets up Jack’s obsession with writing, as he is aiming to make his narrative seem as dramatic as possible. This sets up the theme of duplicity, as he is hiding his knowledge and observations from the unsuspecting gamblers at the table. Because of this, the audience is left wondering how many secrets Jack conceals, and how relevant these will be to the story. Furthermore, the use of Voice-over also makes the viewer interested in seeing what happens to him. Jack is an aloof character, and needs to be depicted in an accessible manner in order to be worth following. By allowing him a way to communicate with the audience in a manner that retains his introverted personality, but permits an insight into how he really feels, the script succeeds in doing this.

Jack’s desire to craft an appealing narrative is consistent throughout the story. At a party with Jani and his publisher, he offers to deal the cards in a round of poker, and gives everyone an increasingly impressive hand, with Jani winning. From this, it is possible to sense the fact that he has feelings for her, but also that he is interested in the world of the casino because he the thrill of watching the gamblers blow a fortune far more fascinating than anything his publisher wants him to write. This fascination with victory and defeat is the main motivation for his actions at the party. Although Jack ditches the stifling world of publishing in favour of his job on the casino floor at the end of the movie, he retains his fascination with observing the world around him. The fact that Jack is defined by this very common and interesting trait allows him to be a compelling anti-hero.

Simple Things Can be Very Interesting – In the third act, Jack gets himself implicated in a robbery by Jani. She offers to pay him if he provides a distraction on the casino floor. All he needs to do is call out a cheater at his table, which he had done earlier in the movie. The fact that the entire robbery hinges on something that Jack normally does without hesitation increases suspense because the plan is too perfect; it involves attaining large rewards with very little effort. If such a routine action has such significant consequences, then the audience can expect the possibility that something must go wrong. The inevitability that their suspicions will be proven correct encourages them to keep watching, as they want to know what will happen to prevent the plan from working.

Give Characters Unique Personalities – Croupier contains three distinctive female characters, Marion, Bella and Jani. All of them have their personalities developed in a simple and effective manner. Marion is introduced via Voice-over with classical music playing in the background, Bella is first seen undressing in a mirror behind Jack, and Jani is a particularly alluring customer at the tables, standing out due to her expensive look and her confident behaviour. As a result of these vivid and contrasting quirks, this group of characters manage to seem unique and developed in spite of the film’s short runtime.

Jack’s father is also introduced in a manner that conveys his mischievous personality. Whilst Jack is struggling for inspiration, he receives a call from his father recommending that he gets a job at a casino. Jack Sr.’s fast and energetic tone contrasts sharply with Jack’s slow and deliberate style of speaking. The viewer can sense that they are in some sort of conflict, as the two are very different in spite of their family relationship. This generates a number of interesting questions. How did Jack and his father drift so far apart, and will there will be any developments that provide further insight into them? The desire to see these questions answered entices the audience to continue watching.

The Audience Should Be Allowed to Observe Things with the Characters–Initially, Jack is unwilling to take up his father’s job offer, but over the course of the film, he gains an increasing affinity for the world of the casino. His natural ability to function in the casino environment is set up in his first scene there, in which he demonstrates his skills as a croupier. Instantly, he observes that the casino is not replacing chips as often as it should, and passes a test of his dealing skills with flying colours. This shows that he understands the basics of gambling better than the people in charge, and this advantage generates both inspiration for his story and the increasing addiction to the atmosphere of the casino.

Little details can serve to develop characters, but they can also generate suspense. Jani reveals the robbery to Jack in a lavish party in a country house. When she takes him, she has her arm in a cast, and tells Jack that it is because she owes a debt to some mysterious enemies, providing an effective pretext to get Jack involved. The next time we see Jani, her injury has healed. However, a bad bruise which Jack gained in a brawl with a disgruntled gambler remains. The viewer can figure out that Jani was faking her injuries and cannot be trusted. This sets up the intriguing mystery of what her real motivations are, and the prospect of finding these out drives the climax.

Make Your World Unique – One of the most unique features of Croupier is the fact that it is based in London, as opposed to a more traditional gambling location such as Las Vegas or Atlantic City. This allows it to demonstrate a different approach to the subgenre of gambling-based movies, whilst providing truths about that industry which are equally applicable in all casinos everywhere. The wide variety of London scenery is used throughout the film. Key interactions with Bella and Jani take place in Piccadilly, a particularly affluent area of the city. The juxtaposition of the vast spaces there and the drab, confined casino highlights the artifice inherent in the latter location. It relies on extravagance just as much as the expensive London shops, but the casino and its employees do not have the ability to make this seem natural, and, as a result, the seediness and desperation that the place relies on is emphasised instead of concealed.

There is also substantial focus on the life behind the tables. Given the cold and formal manner in which croupiers are expected to conduct themselves, their behaviour once their shift is over is revealing. Many of the dealers frequent a club ran by one of the customers – a clear violation of the rules established at the start of the film. The casino is required to project an image of efficiency and professionalism, in order to encourage patrons to gamble away as much money as possible, and this forces the employees to hide their true personalities. Jack’s ability at doing this allows him to thrive in the casino environment.

Conclusion

Although often regarded as a Thriller due to its neo-noir style, Croupier is closer to a character-based Drama. In spite of its short runtime, it manages to create a cast of characters who are memorable and engaging in spite of their unsympathetic nature, and its focus on the mundane reality of ordinary casinos is unique, generating a number of fascinating insights. There is also a significant attention to detail, with the most ordinary things being depicted in a manner that can grab the audience’s attention and arouse their curiosity. This means that Croupier is worth a watch, as it proves that even the shortest movies can be complex and elaborate without becoming boring or incoherent.