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Showing posts with label Fairy Tale. Show all posts
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Sunday, 21 December 2014

5 Screenwriting Lessons – Moulin Rouge!


Who Wrote It?

Moulin Rouge was written by Baz Lurhman and Craig Pearce.

How Long is It?

Moulin Rouge is 122 minutes long, including credits.

What’s It About?

Moulin Rouge is set in 1899 and follows Christian (played by Ewan McGregor), an English writer who heads to the Montmartre district in Paris seeking inspiration from. Once there, he befriends a group of Bohemian performers led by the eccentric Toulouse-Lautrec (played by John Leguizamo) and gets involved in their production “Spectacular Spectacular”. Preparing to pitch the play to Harold Zidler (played by Jim Broadbent), the impresario in charge of the Moulin Rouge nightclub, Christian falls in love with Satine (played by Nicole Kidman), a performer and courtesan who works at the venue. However, the Moulin Rogue’s primary patron, a scheming Duke (played by Richard Roxburgh), wants Satine for himself, and the combination of his interference and Satine’s declining health ensure that Christian’s belief in true love will be severely tested.

5 Screenwriting Lessons – Moulin Rouge
(The Following May Contain Spoilers)

Find A Consistent Tone – After its downbeat opening, which sets up the tragedy of the third act, Moulin Rouge quickly transitions towards the comedic tone that dominates the first half of the film. One of the wackiest scenes is the introduction of Zidler. It is hard to take him seriously when he is introduced performing a rap with lines such as “Outside it may be raining/But in here it’s entertaining!” during a sequence in which “Lady Marmalade” and “Smells Like Teen Spirit” are sang simultaneously by the female and the male dancers at the Moulin Rouge. However, the kitsch, camp approach of the early scenes is replaced by numbers such as “El Tango De Roxanne” which are staged in a dark and restrained manner, fitting the jealousy and distrust that begins to affect Christian’s view of Satine. The dissonance between these two approaches highlight the excesses of the period and the significance of Christian and Satine’s relationship, but also create an unbalanced tone, because it is hard to enjoy the comedy when tragedy is inevitable, and the silly nature of earlier scenes distracts from the importance of later ones.

The change from a comedic approach to a serious one is epitomised in the handling of the female lead, Satine. When she interacts with Christian in her room towards the end of the first act, she makes some rather unsubtle advances towards him, and derives a substantial amount of sexual ecstasy from hearing lines of his poetry. This is followed by a scene where she tries to hide Christian’s presence from the Duke whilst simultaneously seducing him further. These moments would be well-suited to a farce or screwball comedy, and classics of the genre such as A Fish Called Wanda have used similar set pieces to generate a considerable amount of laughs. However, after she and Christian fall in love, Satine turns into a tragic figure. Her struggles with tuberculosis (known as consumption at the time) have been established by this point, but as the disease takes its toll, the depiction of her becomes far more serious. The scene in which she tells Christian that she cannot see him again features a deception that contrasts sharply with her earlier one, as she tries to hide the fact that the real motive for her actions is to protect Christian from the Duke. In contrast to the uninhibited behaviour she demonstrated earlier on, she is very quiet and solemn, which proves that the events she has been through have had a considerable impact on her. This transformation in her character reflects the sombre nature of the second half, and the increased difficulty of sustaining the idyllic relationship with Christian.

Understand the Importance of Fairy Tales– Although it is set in Paris during 1899 and features the iconic painter Toulouse-Lautrec as a central character, Moulin Rouge makes little use of its time period. The only other reference to contemporary France is a brief mention of the French actress Sarah Bernhardt, whilst significant political events such as the Dreyfus Affair go unmentioned. This is done to highlight the timelessness of Christian and Satine’s story. Focusing too much on wider events would make the film about the time period rather than the story and messages it provides. The appeal of a compelling story and a strong message have helped fairy tales to endure centuries after their initial publication, and Moulin Rouge exploits these important aspects in order to ensure that it is just as durable.

Another way in which the story reflects classic fairy tales is through Christian’s show. He and the rest of the personnel behind “Spectacular Spectacular” improvise a story about a courtesan in ancient India, torn between a poor Sitar player and a wealthy Maharajah. The parallels to the existing love triangle between Christian, Satine and the Duke are apparent throughout, and the message that goodness and optimism will triumph reflects the worldview of the protagonists. In the second half of the film, the Duke is alerted to the similarities between the story of the play and his current situation, and decides to change the ending to one where the courtesan ends up with the Maharajah. He defends this alteration by claiming that it is more realistic, but, at the climax of the film, Christian invades the play, eventually managing to defeat the Duke and giving “Spectacular Spectacular” its happy ending. The typical fairy tale provides a fantasy that defies the harsh and cynical nature of the world to present a hopeful and idealised vision of love, in line with the views of Christian and his friends. By proving that this fantasy can triumph over the conventions of reality, the film highlights its value in the modern world.

Music is Key – Christian’s status as a writer is integral to the film’s story. Although the writing he does at the beginning is very traditional, he soon demonstrates an unusual talent for improvising songs. He earns a job as a playwright by helping Toulouse-Lautrec and his troupe write “The Sound of Music”, and wins over Satine with a rendition of “Your Song”. The reason for using songs that would not exist until decades later is to make the film seem more relevant to modern audiences whilst further distancing it from its time period. Because both “The Sound of Music” and “Your Song” fit the character singing them and the context in which he does so, they feel like appropriate songs for the situation. The incongruity between the time period and the music highlight the impact of the latter, as the songs are powerful enough to be applied to an unusual time whilst not feeling out of place. This proves that Christian and Satine’s relationship is not based on the conventions of the time, but the emotions and sensations which inspired the music they sing.

One of the most notable musical numbers in the movie is the “Elephant Love Medley”. In this sequence, Christian sings lines from a wide range of songs, including tracks by the Beatles, U2, and Dolly Parton, in an attempt to serenade Satine. At the beginning, Satine starts out with a cynical outlook, but soon the tone changes, as she begins to engage in the duet with Christian. A rendition of David Bowie’s “Heroes” represents the main turning point, as the two sing together for the first time at the chorus, instead of merely addressing lyrics to one another. Satine’s decision to embrace the defiance and naive optimism conveyed by the lyrics of “Heroes” proves that she is in love with Christian and willing to discard the pragmatic approach that had previously defined her. The gradual change in emotion makes Satine’s love for Christian seem more credible, as it indicates that her primary reason for loving him is his personality rather than his looks.

Create Memorable Characters – Moulin Rouge’s characters are mostly stereotypical – Christian is the wide-eyed innocent, Satine is a beautiful diva torn between dreams of acting and her love for Christian, and the Duke is a moustache-twirling villain. The Bohemians are defined by a handful of traits, with only Toulouse-Lautrec and a narcoleptic Argentine strongman having a substantial amount of lines. The characters are simplistic in nature, but their quirks are emphasised throughout the film, allowing them to stand out. This lack of complexity works to the movie’s advantage, as it reinforces the fairy-tale approach, with characters who are purely good and purely bad. As a result, the film is able to place more emphasis on its main selling points, namely its visuals, music and message.

Make your Visuals Colourful – Moulin Rouge opens with a scene in black-and-white, stylized like a silent movie, in which Toulouse-Lautrec sings the song “Nature Boy” whilst peering out of an open window. As the camera goes through the streets of the Montmarte suburbs, the colours, particularly the shades of red, become increasingly apparent, and by the time we are introduced to Christian, writing about the events of the movie, the visuals are now in full colour. The purpose of the sequence is to transition from the artifice of the black-and-white sequence to the reality of Christian’s story. This means that the audience become immediately involved in his tale, and, as a result, are far more engaged in it than they would be if the opening did not have such an immersive effect.

The use of colour to reflect emotional states is also apparent in “Spectacular Spectacular”, as it is staged for the first time during the climax. Bollywood musicals were a major inspiration behind Moulin Rouge, and this is indicated through the bright colours, gaudy costumes and elaborate stunts that define the genre and are in full display during the performance. Another example of the visuals matching the tone of the story occurs when Santine’s character appears in the production. In Satine’s scenes, the colour is replaced by dark blue lighting and a spotlight focusing on her. This conveys a shift towards a darker tone, as the character she plays sells herself to the Maharajah, and reflects the growing intensity of the movie, as Christian tries to find Satine in order to break up with her, whilst evading the Duke’s henchman. As a result of the ominous mood created by the colour change, the scene turns highly suspenseful, as the chances of Christian rekindling his relationship with Satine become increasingly remote.

Conclusion

Moulin Rouge is full of flaws, but enjoyable nonetheless. The characters are stereotypes, and the film alternates between over-the-top comedy and grand romantic tragedy when it should have prioritised one of those approaches. However, Moulin Rouge is focused on its visuals, soundtrack and story, and these are all very good. Whilst the visuals are unusually bright and the soundtrack is unusually modern, the basic story is inherently appealing, and, for all the excess surrounding it, is conveyed very well. Therefore, it manages to succeed in its primary purpose of being a modern-day fairy tale.

Sunday, 21 September 2014

5 Screenwriting Lessons - Pretty Woman



Who Wrote It?

The script for Pretty Woman was written by J.F. Lawton. It was heavily changed from his original script $3000, which provided a much darker take on the same subject matter.

How Long Is It?

Pretty Woman is 120 minutes long, including end credits.

What’s It About?

Pretty Woman follows Edward Lewis (Played by Richard Gere), a corporate raider who specialises in dismantling failing businesses with the help of his partner Phillip Stuckey (Played by Jason Alexander). Driving away from a party in Stuckey’s car, he gets lost in Hollywood Boulevard, and has to ask prostitute Vivian Ward (Played by Julia Roberts) to give him directions. When he arrives at his hotel, he makes Vivian an offer; For $3000, she can remain with him for a week and accompany him to the various engagements he attends as he spends his time in Los Angeles trying to close a crucial deal. As Vivian gets to buy fancy clothes and attend polo games and opera shows, the two begin to fall in love, and Edward has to question his aggressive approach to business.

5 Screenwriting Lessons – Pretty Woman
(The Following May Contain Spoilers)

Culture Clash Creates Effective Comedy – The funniest sequences in the film are those that depict Vivian adjusting to her new, opulent lifestyle.  One of these occurs when she and Edward arrive at the luxury hotel in which they are staying for the week. When Edward orders champagne and strawberries, Vivian eats the fruit without adding it to the champagne first. This resembles the way in which her friend Kit collects and eats cocktail garnishes in the bar. When we first see this character trait, it fits Vivian and Kit’s uncouth lifestyle, but when Vivian continues doing this in the lap of luxury, the incongruity between setting and behaviour generates some amusing humour.

Even when Vivian starts to look like someone who fits in with the wealthy lifestyle, she continues to behave in an inappropriate fashion in many unfamiliar situations. When she and Edward go to a production of the opera La Traviata (Which has a plot similar to that of Pretty Woman), she struggles to use the opera glasses properly. After the production, she claims that she enjoyed it so much she “almost peed her pants” forcing Edward to step in and cover up the statement. This shows that whilst Vivian has changed in many ways, she still holds onto her uninhibited nature, and this ensures that she remains endearing.

Wish Fulfilment Makes A Film Enjoyable –After Edward and Vivian arrive at their hotel for the first time, he tells her his name for the first time.  Vivian responds by telling Edward that his name is her favourite, and claims that their meeting is due to fate. This sets up one of the key themes of the film, that Edward and Vivian are destined to be together, much like an ideal couple in a fairy tale is. In a similar manner, a throwaway line from Kit highlights the parallels between the world of fairy tales and Vivian’s present situation, as she claims that Cinderella is the only example of a successful prostitute. The basic premise behind the Cinderella story (that beauty and goodness will always lead to prosperity regardless of one’s initial circumstances) is inherently appealing, and Pretty Woman exploits this primal fantasy to create a story that can appeal to the wide majority of viewers.

The fairy tale approach is highlighted in the third act, as Vivian’s contract with Edward nears its end. She tells him about a fantasy that she had whenever she was being mistreated by her aunt, in which she imagined that she was a princess locked in a tower, waiting for a handsome hero to rescue her. Edward’s status as Vivian’s heroic knight is subsequently demonstrated twice, once when he rescues her from Stuckey, and in the end scene, where he goes to her apartment with flowers and overcomes his fear of heights to meet her on the fire escape at the top floor. This focus on fantasy is highlighted by an ending voice-over which tells the viewer that Hollywood is the “land of dreams” and they should “Keep on dreaming”. The fact that modern-day LA is used as the location for this fairy tale highlights the fact that this fantasy remains relevant and will never lose its popularity.

Relationships Should Progress Organically – Given the unsavoury nature of his job and his initial relationship with Vivian, Edward has to be made into a likeable protagonist if the audience is going to root for him to gain a happy ending. Therefore, his introduction to Vivian occurs by accident, when he asks her for directions. The two have a long conversation in the car, and Edward is impressed with Vivian’s knowledge of how it works. This ensures that, when he invites Vivian to join him in the hotel, his reasons for doing so are sympathetic, because he is basing his decision more on personality than on looks.

Pretty Woman also makes good use of a limited time frame during which the story can steadily escalate. Initially, Edward and Vivian only make plans for a single night together, but by the following morning, he is willing to pay her to stay with him for the rest of the week.  On the sixth night, the two kiss mouth-to-mouth for the first time, violating a key aspect of their agreement to keep their relationship from becoming too personal. The use of a time limit means that the story moves at a consistent pace, with a romantic tension that increases as the deadline nears.

Supporting Characters Should Mirror the Protagonist in Some Way – As Edward and Vivian spend the week together, they begin revealing personal secrets about each other, which highlight how much they have in common, despite their initial differences. For example, both had troubled relationships with their family (Edward’s distant relationship with his father is echoed by Vivian’s absent parents) and a series of failed romances. As Edward becomes disillusioned with his job, he realises that he “Screws people for money” just like Vivian. This awareness is key to a relationship, as the couples’ ability to connect with each other encourages them to realise that they have more reasons to stay together than they thought during their first meeting.

Conversely, Edward’s relationship with Stuckey deteriorates as he realises that he does not want to continue following his avaricious approach. Initially, the two enjoy a pretty close relationship, and Stuckey’s decision to loan Edward his car sets the plot in motion. As the story progresses and Edward’s positive traits, such as his love of creating things, become more apparent, Stuckey’s negative traits start to stand out. In the climax, he tries to force himself upon Vivian, at which point Edward fights him off and announces that he will no longer have him as a partner. Whilst the protagonist changes for the better, the antagonist should not only retain the traits that mark them out as an obstacle, these unpleasant characteristics should become increasingly pronounced as the protagonist grows.

Character Goals Should Be at the Centre of the Story – Edward’s primary goal, of maintaining his relationship with Vivian, soon becomes intertwined with an internal goal, which entails being less of a workaholic and learning to appreciate life. Initially, Edward refuses to spend time with Vivian, as he is too busy focusing on his work, but when he takes  a day off to be with her, he begins to realise that there is more to life then getting business deals signed. His decision to abort the takeover of a struggling shipping business and partner up with the owner instead reflects the fact that he has become less self-centred as a result of his week with Vivian, and is now focused on helping others. The ability to be kind to others is a strong positive trait, and the fact that Edward is more willing to demonstrate these attributes than he was at the beginning of the film is a major indicator of how much he has grown as a character.

Vivians’ desire to escape the seedy world in which she works is made evident from her introduction. She looks on, horrified, as tourists take photographs of a dead body in the back alleys of Hollywood Boulevard, and is dismayed by the fact that Kit spends their rent money on drugs. Even before she tells Edward that she wants to escape the prostitution industry, we can sense that she prefers the opportunities generated by his lavish lifestyle. Whilst her goal of finding a better life remains consistent throughout, her means of doing so change through the duration of the film. This is evident when she refuses Edward’s offer to provide for her after the two part ways, and decides to resume her education instead. As a result of time she has spent with him, she has realised that her main aim is to be seen as a strong and independent woman, and not subject to the degradation and exploitation that has defined her time as a hooker.

Verdict

Pretty Woman is a notable example of a movie designed to be escapist. Although traces of the dark source material appear on occasion, it is generally an idealistic portrayal of idealised characters. Although the contrast between the glamorous protagonists and their distinctly unglamorous jobs can be problematic for some, the film succeeds in providing memorable characters with a well-developed relationship, and amusing comedy stemming from the contrast between characters and situations.  Overall, it succeeds in its aim of providing a modern-day fairy tale for adults with a storybook approach, but still manages to keep the focus on the characters, as a good romantic comedy should.