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Showing posts with label Satire. Show all posts
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Tuesday, 20 January 2015

5 Screenwriting Lessons – The Player


Who Wrote It?


The Player was written by Michael Tolkin, and based on his novel of the same name.

How Long Is It?


The Player is 124 minutes long, including credits.

What’s It About?


The Player follows Griffin Mill (played by Tim Robbins), an executive at a film studio with the job of approving or rejecting the numerous scripts he sees. When he begins to receive threatening letters, he suspects David Kahane (played by Vincent D’Onofrio), a hot-tempered screenwriter whose idea he had dismissed in the past, of sending them, and goes to Pasadena to confront him. During a heated brawl, Griffin accidently kills David, but as the threats continue, he realises that he was going after the wrong man. This forces Griffin to try and cover up his crime, whilst avoiding being exposed in an investigation conducted by Detective Avery (played by Whoopi Goldberg). He also has to deal with a rival for his job, whilst conducting a romance with David’s widow June Gudmundsdottir (played by Greta Scacchi)


5 Screenwriting Lessons – The Player

(The Following May Contain Spoilers)


Demonstrate Movie Knowledge – The Player relies heavily on “in-jokes”, which can be understood by those with an advanced knowledge of movies. One of these is a reference to the successful erotic thriller Fatal Attraction. Shortly after Griffin kills David, we hear an executive mention the fact that the movie’s ending was changed as a result of audience feedback. The specifics of this change are not mentioned in the scene, but Fatal Attraction’s initial, darker, ending was replaced by a more mainstream climax in which the protagonist kills his unhinged stalker in a fight in the bathroom. This allusion has two purposes. First of all, it reflects the action we have just seen, implying that Griffin’s actions will have far greater repercussions then they do in the movies. It also sets up the changes that the studio will make to their movie Habeas Corpus, demonstrating that they will always put audience approval before creative freedom, therefore establishing a major theme of the movie. As a result, a seemingly innocuous piece of movie trivia that reflects the Hollywood execs’ obsession with movies turns out to be significant for both the characters and the story.

There are also a number of in-jokes which do not pertain directly to the plot, but instead focus on the large number of celebrities who cameoed. Sixty actors, 12 of whom were Oscar winners, made cameos in the movie, and there are a number of allusions to their fame, for example a scene in which Griffin is accosted by Malcom MacDowell, an actor famous for playing threatening characters in violent movies such as A Clockwork Orange. This adds a degree of realism to the movie, as fictional characters are interacting with these celebrities as if they were real people in their world as well, and the dialogue between the characters and celebrities would feel plausible in Hollywood. However, this gimmick also adds to the artifice inherent in the story. Even when an actor is playing a character within the film, their celebrity status is made clear throughout. Detective Avery is introduced holding an Oscar, a reference to Whoopi Goldberg’s win for her role in the movie Ghost, which occurred just a year before The Player was released. The large number of stars making gratuitous appearances reflects the belief that Hollywood movies rely too much on star power, but at the same time, The Player takes this convention to its logical extremes.

Meta-humour Can Be Easy to Understand – Meta-humour is a term used for comedy that is about the telling of jokes, and the use of jokes about filmmaking in The Player is key to its irreverent approach. The opening scene depicts everyday life on the backlot of a typical Hollywood studio. It moves between various execs discussing movies, studio tours, and pitches being conducted in the rooms overlooking the space, with all these elements being shown in a single eight-minute shot. The scene introduces the characters of Griffin and Bonnie, and establishes the former as the protagonist by setting up the threat to his job, and ending with him receiving his first poison pen letter. The unusual nature of this introduction is highlighted by two employees discussing Hollywood’s obsession with constant cuts, and talking about similar single-take openings, such as the beginning of the classic movie Touch of Evil. This sets up the “Postmodern” tone of the movie, in which the reality of Hollywood is deconstructed to reveal that the movie studios are just as artificial as the films they make.  

The ending is another example of meta-humour, as it proves that The Player is set in a world guided by movie conventions instead of more sensible outcomes. In the final scene, Griffin receives one last call from his blackmailer, who presents the story of Griffin’s crime and escape in the form of a pitch, and promises to provide a Hollywood ending for him “if the price is right”. This is followed by Griffin’s return to June, and the closing lines of the film are the same as the closing lines that follow Habeas Corpus’ tacked-on happy ending (“What took you so long?” “Traffic was a Bitch”). This demonstrates that the resolution of the movie is primarily based on the audience’s desire for a completely happy ending. In providing one for Griffin despite his actions, the film aims to make viewers question the ease with which it was attained, and therefore point out how problematic a formulaic Hollywood ending can be when applied to a situation where it’s undeserved.

Increase Suspense – The Player climaxes with a scene in which Griffin is put in a police line-up, and has to avoid being identified as David’s killer by a witness. As the detectives move through each of the suspects in turn, the tension is increased by the inexorable progress of the procedure, as it is already clear that Detective Avery believes that Griffin is guilty of first-degree murder. This puts him at a disadvantage, and leaves the audience wondering how he will manage to escape. Therefore, when the witness identifies the wrong person as the culprit, it is easy for the viewer to feel Griffin’s relief, in spite of the fact he has just gotten away with murder, as the outcome he had expected and feared is avoided in dramatic fashion.

Another tense scene occurs at the end of the first act, and Griffin goes to Dave’s house to try and find him. His call is intercepted by June, and, as he talks to her, he tries to spy on her through the window whilst avoiding detection. Although David is out of the house, the risk of being exposed by June could ruin Griffin’s chances of creating peace with him and ending the increasingly vicious threats that he has been receiving. Furthermore, as Griffin talks to June, he begins to develop feelings for her, and the prospect of this makes reconciliation with David even less likely. Putting a character in jeopardy is a good way of making the audience interested in them, and the threat Griffin faces, whilst mostly his own fault, is serious enough for most viewers to relate to his desire to be free of it.

Focus on Primal Issues – Griffin is a notable example of an antihero who can interest the audience in spite of his unlikeable behaviour. Even before he kills David, he is demanding specific brands of water from a waiter, and complaining when it is served in a wine glass as opposed to a more traditional one. However, when he commits the murder that should make audiences hate him even more, it is a panic-based accident. Because the circumstances in which the crime was committed are easy to understand, the audiences becomes interested in seeing whether or not Griffin can avoid the murder conviction which he now faces.

One example of the emphasis on basic feelings that can be understood by all viewers is the subplot focusing on the making of a legal thriller called Habeas Corpus. The script is depicted as being very pretentious, relying almost entirely on its bleak denouement, and the enthusiasm with which the writers accept the happy ending imposed on it at the end reveals that their focus on making a “serious” movie was little more than a marketing gimmick to attract audience attention. However, for all its melodrama, the basic concept of Habeas Corpus (a prosecutor tries to get an innocent woman executed in a bid to subvert Capital Punishment statistics) is highly dramatic and therefore intriguing. As a result, it feels like a movie that Hollywood could conceivably make (Michael Tolkin was allegedly approached to turn it into a real film), and this increases both the realism of the world in which the Hollywood executives operate, and the accuracy of the satire.

Understand the Realities of the Industry – With its emphasis on the realities of Hollywood, The Player places a significant amount of focus on role of screenwriters in the movie industry. The opening scene features a lot of screenwriters pitching stories with outlandish premises that can be summed up by comparing two existing movies; For example, When Griffin receives his first threat, he is listening to a pitch describing a story as “Ghost meets The Manchurian Candidate”. This simplistic style of pitching grabs the attention, but makes the movies seem highly formulaic, establishing that Griffin and the other executives would rather have a marketable film than an original one.

There are also a number of instances where excerpts from screenplays are read out loud. Bonnie reads a poorly-written, mechanical, sex scene from a popular script to Griffin, whilst the writers of Habeas Corpus begin their pitch with short sharp sentences and vivid descriptions that attract Griffin’s attention, but highlight the ostentatious nature of the project. The Player is primarily focused on storytelling, but the way in which a script is written reflects the approach the writers are taking to their material. Even though the screenwriting industry is portrayed in a rather unflattering light, the observation that storytelling is one of the most important aspects of a movie can be highly valuable to anyone trying to write a strong script.

Summary


The Player is a great example of a satire that can be highly vicious towards its primary target, the people working for the movie industry in Hollywood, but is light-hearted enough to be enjoyed by them as well. It uses creative meta-humour, and manages to be intriguing and suspenseful enough to catch the audience’s attention, in spite of the unlikeable protagonist. However, the most important reason for The Player’s success as a satire is its knowledge of the movie industry and the aggressive manner in which it operates. This provides the film with a level of insight that is just as relevant today as it was upon its release in 1992. As a result of this, The Player is an especially good film to watch if you’re familiar with the movie industry, as any budding screenwriter should be.

Thursday, 31 July 2014

5 Screenwriting Lessons- Dr Strangelove, Or: How I Learned To Stop Worrying and Love the Bomb




Who Wrote It?
Director Stanley Kubrick wrote the script with Terry Southern and Peter George. Peter George was also the writer of “Fail Safe”, the book upon which Dr Strangelove was loosely based.

How Long is it?
Dr Strangelove is 102 minutes long, including credits.

What’s it About?
Dr Strangelove chronicles a nuclear crisis triggered by the deranged General Jack D Ripper (Played by Sterling Hayden). When Ripper orders the B-52 bombers under his command to attack Russia, the most powerful men in America gather in the “War Room” to try and sort out the ensuing crisis. They include the US President, Merkin Muffley (Played by Peter Sellers), General Buck Turgidson (Played by George C. Scott) and the wheelchair-bound ex-Nazi Dr Strangelove (Also played by Peter Sellers). Meanwhile, Ripper’s executive officer Captain Mandrake (Peter Sellers again, in his third role in the film) tries to find a way of recalling the planes, but the crew of one bomber, captained by Major “King” Kong (played by Slim Pickens) tries to carry out its mission, regardless of the obstacles or consequences.

5 Screenwriting Lessons from Dr Strangelove, or: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the Bomb
(The Following May Contain Spoilers)

Sometimes, The Audience Should be made to Feel Smarter than the Main Characters- Satirical films like Dr Strangelove rely on a (mostly) foolish set of characters to highlight their points about the flaws in our institutions. General Ripper claims that “War is too important to be left to the politicians” as they are no good at strategic thought. However, he is sending dozens of men to bomb the USSR based on a conspiracy theory that only he believes. This shows that, instead of encouraging peace, leaving war in the hands of individuals like Ripper increases the destruction caused by the conflict.

Ripper’s motive for ordering the planes to attack the Soviet Union is his belief that the fluoridation of water is part of a Communist plot “to sap and impurity all of our basic bodily fluids”. Ripper claims that he became aware of it when he experienced “A profound sense of fatigue” and “A feeling of emptiness” after having sex with a woman. The fact that Ripper takes this entirely normal sensation as proof of a communist conspiracy highlights just how distrusting he is, and just how unqualified he is to be in charge of the US military.

Incongruity Should be Everywhere Incongruity is a key part of Dr. Strangelove. Many of the small lines and details are full of irony and subversion. Apart from the famous line “You can’t fight in here. This is the War Room!” delivered by President Muffley towards General Turgidson and the Russian Ambassador in attendance at the crisis talks, there are a number of small details and sight gags in the scene in which troops invade General Ripper’s base. Two of the signs there read “Keep off the Grass” and “Peace is Our Profession”. The orderly and formal nature of the base creates a contrast with, and therefore emphasises, the chaos unfolding inside.

Another example of incongruity highlighting the bizarre nature of the central crisis is when the nature of the Soviet Doomsday Machine is revealed. Dr Strangelove dismisses the idea that there is one currently in operation, claiming that “The whole point of the Doomsday Machine…Is lost if you keep it a secret”. However, the Soviet Ambassador confirms its existence, claiming that it would have been revealed to the world later. Keeping such a powerful deterrent secret contradicts the very purpose of having it, and demonstrates how ridiculous the posturing on both sides is.

Exaggeration Leads to Effective Satire - If you have ever used a payphone, you will be able to appreciate how inconvenient it is to be short on money. In Dr Strangelove, this is taken a step further. When General Mandrake is in that situation, he is trying to call President Muffley and tell him that he’s figured out the coded message which will make the US bombers turn back. This serves the purpose of showing how chaotic and inefficient the communication between the government and the army is, as the safety of the world ends up depending on the presence of change in a Coca-Cola Machine. By taking a trivial but relatable scenario and placing it in the middle of such an important situation, the sequence makes viewers aware of how difficult it is to solve an international crisis, especially with the threat of nuclear annihilation looming over the horizon.

Another instance in which a critical event is exaggerated in the name of satirical humour is the famous scene of Kong “Riding the bomb”, which is one of the funniest and most iconic moments in the film. The humour comes from the incongruity between the effects of the action and the way Kong treats it. When the bomb lands, it will not only obliterate him, but set off the chain of events which will render the earth uninhabitable. However, Kong is waving his hat and cheering as if he was riding a bull at a rodeo. The pleasure he takes in unleashing the bomb is a little bit unnerving, but it is so over-the-top that you cannot help but laugh.

Subvert the Established Standards - In the midst of a crisis that could spell the end of the world, you would normally expect a telephone conversation between the US President and the Soviet Premier to be formal and serious, with both sides trying to discuss the matter in a loud and aggressive manner. However, in Dr Strangelove, President Muffley’s attempts at informing his Russian counterpoint of the impending crisis represent a great example of awkward humour. Muffley begins his conversation with banal small talk (“It’s good to be fine”), then tries to explain General Ripper’s actions by claiming that “He went and did a silly thing”. By depicting the impending bombing in this way, he unintentionally makes it seem trivial and ridiculous. The understatement in this scene creates brilliant comedy, and also highlights that Muffley is out of his depth handling the crisis – a stark contrast to the prevalent image of the strong, decisive president bravely handling international disputes that became popular after Kennedy managed to diffuse the Cuban Missile Crisis (which happened whilst the film was being written).

This is not the only time that the film undermines the conventional belief that the USA is being looked after by brave and heroic people. The opening of the movie is shot and narrated like a war movie or Newsreel, invoking audience memories of the usually positive depiction of the US air force in those mediums. However, when we first see Major Kong, the government manual he appears to be reading turns out to be an issue of Playboy. This is a quick and amusing way of establishing that, in contrast to the honourable soldiers of more traditional war movies, Kong and his crew are a distinctly unheroic and ordinary lot.

Deliver the Message Effectively – Dr Strangelove aims to expose the flaws in the US government’s handling of the Cold War, which was a major concern when the movie was released in 1964. The prevalent belief in USA at the time was that neither they nor the Soviet Union would dare attack each other, because it would lead to both sides being wiped out. This idea of Mutually Assured Destruction is taken to its logical conclusion with the Soviet’s Doomsday Machine, and all it takes to set it off is a single bomber whose crew were unable to take orders telling them to go back. This highlights how fragile the peace between USA and the USSR was, and encourages viewers to consider the potential costs should the conflict escalate.

The consequences of the distrust between the two sides is highlighted at the end, as the US government considers Strangelove’s proposal for a select band of civilians to live underground for about 100 years until the radiation generated by the Doomsday machine has subsided. However, Turgidson opposes the proposal, claiming that the nuclear apocalypse will not prevent the Soviets from trying to take over their mineshafts. He is so scared of the Communists that he believes that war will continue, even when almost everyone on both sides has been destroyed. This proves how ridiculous the USA’s hatred of their enemies can be, as it continues even after its consequences have rendered the world uninhabitable.

Verdict

50 years after its initial release, Dr Strangelove still holds up as a classic satire. It’s a bit slow at times, owing to the large amount of technical terms used in the discussions of the conflict, but it is certainly worth watching in full. It is full of irony, exaggeration, subversion, stupidity (from the characters) and intelligence (from the writers), the five defining features of satire. Most importantly, it communicates its messages about the folly of the cold war effectively, with great lines, great scenes and memorable characters.